Wednesday Writing XII

Well, it’s Wednesday so it‘s time to add to our collaborative community story.

We’re following a flashback of our main character, Samantha. The story thus far is on the blog under “Story.”

Here’s where we left off.

So many questions … so few answers…

The parents set up a dinner with us the next day. We agreed, but on our way back to the hotel, I told Chad we were being set up. “You know they want to separate us,” I said.

“I know,” said Chad, “but that’s not going to happen.”

Our dinner went just as expected. My mom, while cordial, said she felt I should stay at home while Chad “figured out the lay of the land” in Ohio. Besides, she said, “you still have school. You’re not going to throw away the past three years, are you?” Dad, likewise, had a million reasons why his little girl should not go to Ohio. Chad’s dad said he was willing to build a little apartment for us, a project his mom fully endorsed. And all four felt we should get married “in the eyes of God.”

We listened, at first adamant about starting our lives together. But the constant “suggestions” started wearing us — or, more accurately — Chad down. After dessert, we gave them all our hugs and kisses and headed back to the hotel. That’s when Chad said, “You know, they made some sense. I have to report for duty. I don’t even know if I’ll be allowed off base right away. And I don’t know anything about the Dayton area.”

I, on the other hand, was very quiet. I said very little, my eyes slowly welling with tears. Finally, I pulled my hand away and said to him, “Why did we even bother to get married?”

I guess you could say that was our first disagreement, just over two days from our I do’s.

I knew Chad was right, but I was hurt. I felt betrayed, especially since he promised it — our separation — wouldn’t happen.

We continued to discuss the issue at the hotel and “agreed” I would stay here while he settled in. But I let him know in no uncertain terms I wasn’t happy with the decision. We went to bed with a kiss and “I love you” but we went to sleep — or at least pretended to sleep.

Tuesday, Chad headed to Ohio and I went back home …

There you go, readers. What’s next?  How long were they separated? How did that impact their marriage?

All you have to do is put down your thoughts and get them to me. You can post your ideas as comments on the blog – but remember everyone will see them, so the “surprise” factor might get lost – or you can e-mail me directly at revblt@rochester.rr.com. Each Wednesday I will continue the story on the blog, along with that week’s attribution and periodically update Reveille/Between the Lakes readers. The complete story thus far is available on the blog under “Story.”

I hope we can have some fun with this.

THOUGHT TO REMEMBER: A man becomes exactly the person he wants to become.

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4 Responses to Wednesday Writing XII

  1. Cathy Marcuccilli says:

    Some thoughts: Chad’s parents did build a little apartment, which took 3 months to build. Samantha finished her final year at school and graduated. During the year, Chad stayed in the apartment while on leave, and Samantha visited him in Ohio during some of her college breaks. They arranged a church ceremony to please their parents and to renew their vows in a religious setting. Samantha appreciated the practical side of Chad, yet realized that they would need her strength of mind and determination to stay on course with their marriage. Eventually, she realizes that Chad also has these qualities when needed, although it’s harder for him to make and stand by an independent decision. They were both so busy with their individual daily tasks, and remained committed to each other, that their marriage survived, without a major negative impact. They were able to consistently reignite their passion for each other.

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